The song of fragments
stitched together by memories,
The wound must bleed.
The lasts are more important than firsts
the last word
the last time
the last place.
empty lies on the promise
of better tomorrow.
Sorrow of seconds dissolved in minutes
heavy heart in a discolored room.
It keep coming
in the past, present and future
From wishing on falling stars
to fall like stars.
~🧜♀️
15 replies on “Sorrow’s Vertigo”
Sobering words.
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Thank you my friend.
Have a wonderful start to the new year 🌻
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YW, and may yours be all you desire.
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Ye is wow
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Thank you ❤️
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From all suffering comes wisdom; indeed it has been said that this is the only source of it for humans. Good providence in the next year, let us hope.
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Thank you for your kind words. Happy new year ❤️
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you too. :)
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Beautiful poem full of beautiful language and imagery.
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Thank you 🌻
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“The lasts are more important than the firsts.” Ironic that I should read this after just posting a piece about the “firsts” of last year. Ironic, too, that we don’t always know when we’re experiencing a “last” – the last time you say goodbye to someone, your last birthday, last Christmas with the whole family together… Treasure every moment.
As I stood outside on New Year’s Eve, listening to the fireworks going off in the distance, I did wonder whether 2023 would be the year I leave this world. Not in a morbid way, but the future life is going to be so much better than this one, I’m really looking forward to it – but first I need to finish whatever God put me here to do.
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I’m glad to hear your thoughts, time and situations and really unpredictable and we should always try to make most of it. Wishing you a good year🌸
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You inspired me to record my incoming voicemail message for January (I change it every month with an encouraging word/quote based on season).
This month, I invited callers to discover many colors because life would be dull if we lived a paint-by-number canvas. I desire variety yet crave security. Gritty blends of life.
Thank you for sharing your generous wisdom, Christina
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Thank you, Christina. I love your thoughts on colors in life. May we all try to see and explore all the colours and if needed, be with the colours to enjoy the moment.
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A sad poem, but I like it. Thanks for sharing.
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