I have heard
people complaining
about writers
not writing
their whole heart,
always trying
to hide some part.
And I have seen
people trying to
explore
the unknown;
like writers
are not people,
like they are
not their own.
And I always think
why is that so after all?
So here
I’m putting
my whole heart
(with all the pieces)
in this poem
and now
This poem is whole.
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Beautiful
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You’re welcome my friend stay blessed
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“This poem is whole”
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Very nice. My writing is always from my heart and always totally honest about my cancer fight. Very nice poem x
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“Nothing can be whole or complete” is well-expressed.
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Thank you 🌻
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Noice
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Yayyy
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Absolutely beautiful!
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Thank you!
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Beautiful as always! 😻 I needed to read this at this time!! How did you know? 😸😸
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Because a poem will always find a reader.
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I hope it wasn’t me who seemed to be complaining. And your poem is great! :)
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No no.
Thank you.
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Another superb poem that works perfectly on all levels… technical and most importantly, feeling
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Wholely beautiful. ❤
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Thank you so much ❤️
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Nice.. 🙂
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Thank you!
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Well written..🙂
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Thank you!
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Beautiful ❤️
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entrancing
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nailed it.
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Thank you.
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#KeepWritingYourheart
Maybe none of us have all the pieces of our heart to write about?
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We always have our pieces.. all of them.
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😁
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Yes it is
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Always has been whole. We share a lot more than words, sometimes more than even we know. It is not the writer’s problem if readers have all the shutters and doors of their mind closed and locked.
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love the whole poem and your whole heart
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Woah!!!🌟
Its nice💙
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Thank you 💙
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Winsome…✨
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Thank you!
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I appreciate how you said it authentically….here’s my whole heart. The reader gets to interpret what that looks like. (to me, I’ve read several of your pieces and it looks purely seeking and curiously kind!)
With support for your heart’s journey! Christina (Oak Ridge, TN)
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Thank you for the wonderful support 🌻
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This is a beautiful piece. Just going through your poems and I’m like “woow!!” Really great poems. Well done👍
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Thank you so much 🌻
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You’re welcome
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I like the style of writing, light writing and fill of emotions, nice one 👌
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Thank you so much 🌻
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I always try to say something meaningful when I’ve read something that strikes a chord with me. But all I can say is thank you for sharing this poem, it is beautiful. ♥
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That was so sweet ❤️
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I love your poem due to its authenticity and because you’ve addressed a life-long issue: the truthfulness of self-expression in art. Virginia Woolf once said: “Every secret of a writer’s soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind is written large in his works.”
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I am honoured.
Thank you for reading.
I love Virginia Woolf❤️
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Ohh, this poem is whole! I love it- it’s superb!
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Thank you so much.
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Like!! Thank you for writing such insightful poems.
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Thank you for reading.
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This is Indeed the wholesome poem.
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I love how you expressed this topic. Great work!
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Thank you so much.
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r/poetry welcomes you :)
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Perfectly pulled the strings to make it whole… 👌
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Yayy❤️
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This was a beautiful, needed piece. Thank you 💜
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Thank you so much ❤️
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True, we cannot reveal our whole heart in a piece of poetry!!
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Thank you for the support 🌻
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You are welcome!!
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This poems reads so smoothly. So beautiful
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So glad you liked.
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Well done, Mermaid! Your piece holds a significant message about writers being emotionally connected with their work.
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Thank you for the appreciation 🌻
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Wow! I love this poem!! Beautiful!
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This poem is whole
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Beauuutiful!!
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A clever thing you did here!
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