Once I met a broken sunset
stunning in pink and beautifully alone,
He was tip toe-ing through twilight
asking me to step into unknown.
My inside and out felt like stones
but I was willing to know what it has to say,
For sometimes the most ordinary things become blessings
and I had nothing to do, anyway.
He took me to the core of colours
and said he can give me all of them,
And he asked me:
Humans talk about the lonely hearts that bleed in silence whole night, but what about the open wounds that stinks at 2 pm?
Beautiful composition.
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Thank you 🌻
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This is an Epic write…I loved imaging it ❤.
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Thank you❤️
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Haye
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🥶
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You are an absolutely superb poet!
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Means so much❤️
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Wow!! This is such a beauty!! ❤️ Especially the last line… 😍😍😍😍
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So glad youu liked❤️
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💕
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Woww❤
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Your support means a lot❤️
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This was really beautiful! Wow🌹❤
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Thank you very much 🌻
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A very creative poem, penned beautifully! 💙
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Thank you, Aditi! ❤️
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The open wounds burn everyday….wonderfully depicted….It seems you have a thing for sunsets
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Yeah!
Haha yes, I do have a thing for sunsets.
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Another amazing poem! I could picture it well and I love that the sunset was a “him”!! 😻😻
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Thank you for the wonderful support ❤️
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You made sunset even more beautiful🌄
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Yayy! Thank you 🌸
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Wow, I love this, the opening line, draws you in 😀
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Glad you liked.
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Loved reading this , it was beautiful 😊
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Thank you, beautiful.
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Wow, this put such a clear image in my head.
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I’m glad you liked.
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Epic question in the end…blown away😍❤️
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Yayyy❤️
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The end was sad and beautiful.
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Thank you for reading 🌻
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😊
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Thought provoking!
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Glad you liked!
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beautiful ❤️
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Thank you❤️
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Woww🤩
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Yayy🌻
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Beautiful 😍😍😍
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Thank you!
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This is gorgeous. So amazing
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Beautifully written ❤❤
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Thank you ❤️
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My pleasure 😊
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Woww!! This is so deep…
And a lovely rhyming scheme too!!
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Hey there! For being the terrifically amazing writer that you are, I nominated you for the #sunshinebloggeraward.
https://achillesheelpoetry.wordpress.com/2020/05/17/the-sunshine-blogger-award/
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Thank you 🌻
But I don’t do awards.
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All the same, I appreciate and admire your work, and therefore wanted to let you know the same.
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I’m honoured 🌻
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🙂
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That last verse… 🖤 🖤 🖤
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Thank you for reading 🌻
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You’re most welcome.
This was epic 🖤
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Nobody is interested in those open wound!! So we’ll written, enjoyed it thoroughly. 👍👍
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