Mirror, mirror
on the wall.
I asked her about
the heart with a hole.
Empty eyes were
actually screaming,
scared of nightmares
and daydreaming.
Four hours
she didn’t speak,
A powerful soul,
within a body so weak.
Instead of healing,
she keep choosing pain,
Stuck in labyrinth
of loss and gain.
~Mermaid~
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Beautiful.
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Woow,so beautiful
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Sometimes labyrinth is home.
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Very true.
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If I were that mirror, I would’ve extracted her, held her close until the lights gleam, retuned in her eyes and smile on her face.
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That’s a really sweet thought🌼
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Perhaps she’s beyond the point where she wants to be healed and by default chooses pain
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You got it right.
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Wow. . .this is so amazing. . . I love it :)
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One wonders, why would anyone choose pain over healing? And yet, that’s what so many people do. I think the reason is that we can never heal ourselves without help from the Divine Healer. This is why I’m so persistent (obnoxious?) about sharing Jesus with anyone and everyone, praying that they will choose Him and live. (John 10:10) Blessings!
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Beautiful poem indeed!!
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Nice one
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Welcome dear
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Nice poem dear.
❤️✌️
BY FOR NOW
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Your welcome dear.
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BY FOR NOW
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This was really beautiful and this one was so moving and awesome I coudlnt resist cant wait for the next post!
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Wow painful
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Unfortunately.
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Bravo!
Lovely powerful poetry mermaid💐
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Thank you 💐
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Welcome💐
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Beautiful 🌺
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Thank you, Sarika🌺
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My absolute pleasure dear 💕
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this is exquisite writing
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keep em coming, hehe
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so sad yet so sweet
Ironic how everything that kills us makes us feel alive
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Ironically!
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Wonderful poem!
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An honest way to contemplate- stand infront of a mirror!
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Thank you for reading.
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Beautiful
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welcome
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A great piece of self-reflection, and it’s well-presented!!
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Thank you so much.
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My pleasure, Mermaid!!
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Hi, would love for you to check out my blog and let me know what you think ☺️
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Sure.
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Very powerful writing! Wonderful!
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Thank you so much.
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Wow … wonderful …I 😍 it 🚩
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I like it a lot
BRAVA !!!
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Glad to know.
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see ya 🖐👏
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Beautiful! You have a poet’s heart and a fairy tale of imagination. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Great poem!! I look forward to the next post!
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Thank you!
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Powerful “eyes screaming” I love that. Great prose mermaid. Beautiful! Thanks for sharing. 💕 Joni
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Thank you, Joni.
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What a great poem, simple yet so meaningful.
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Sadness
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I know.
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This felt like satin on my back…
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The mirror says the truth. Well most of the times.
Well done.😊
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wow so touching
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Beautiful poem
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Thank you.
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Your welcome ❤️❤️❤️
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Just wow. Thank you for sharing. 💜
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Thank you for reading 💜
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