You asked what I have to offer?
Well nothing much.
Few poetries, painted pots
and your sketches on
coffee dipped sheets.
Weird music, witty remarks
and book stores
of nearby streets.
Few jars of nutella,
breakfast dates,
And wind chimes
on your gates.
We both know
I’m not going to stay.
I promise not to leave
your world, pale and grey.
You’ll start to know metaphors
maybe fall for cliches too?
Love is not supposed to hurt
I will prove this to you.
I promise you’ll learn to go out,
whether it’s summer or snow.
Rain will stop stealing your smile,
I’ll teach you to paint rainbow.
82 replies on “Clichés”
Rhymed so well. Nicely put!! :)
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful.
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Thank you.
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🙂
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Just lovely! Thank you for sharing!
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Love is not supposed to hurt is in itself a cliche and you are proving it through your posts
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Thank you for reading 🌼
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😭😭😭
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I know 😭❤
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Simply Awesome!
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Thank you!
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Please teach me to paint a rainbow
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“Love is not supposed to hurt
I will prove this to you.” — What extraordinary thought. It’s a short statement but answers many questions. I have been researching into proof of love all my life.
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I hope you find the proof soon🌼
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I have….
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That’s beautiful.
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A beautiful poem for such a carefree spirit who knows how to live life without fear.
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Thank you for reading.
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Always a true pleasure my friend
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I love this
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Glad to know 🌼
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Everybody has something to offer.
“Few poetries, painted pots
and your sketches on
coffee dipped sheets.
Weird music,…”
But should it necessarily continue lifelong or could few moments be enough to stay with you for life? Both ways the receiver is enriched.
“We both know
I’m not going to stay.
I promise not to leave
your world, pale and grey.”
Lovely!
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Glad you liked 🌼
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This gives me a sweet feeling.
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I’m happy to know 😊
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Beautiful, light-hearted yet full of deep love.
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Thank you, Joey.
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Reblogged this on Writing With Strangers and commented:
I read this today, and liked it so much. Just wanted to give it a reblog
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❤❤
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Such a positive spin on breaking up. 🙂
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Yayy🙂
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Intimate relationships can and usually are difficult to maintain. The big question is are the two in one willing to put in the work and lasting commitment. Your work often touches on or even revolves around this difficult paradox of romantic love. Are you a romantic or an idealist? Maybe both I ponder. Ah yes, mermaids and butterflies have secrets too!
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Relationships are really messy sometimes but the real deal is how we handle things.
Thank you for reading.
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Kajal, so very true because even the sour grapes teach us how much more valuable and precious the sweet ones are; and my Dad taught me as a young man, when things go wrong we must accept the reality sometimes they do; then its how me move forward and make the best of it. To me that is what builds character!
I saw the comment you made about having secrets but then it vanished? Back to secret land? So now the idea of having a secret is a secret too! I like that, kind of cute. The secret almost got away! 😉
Lawrence
PS eventually all secrets come out of hiding!
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I was thinking of that comment too, but can’t find it. Let it be a secret then! 😁
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Well explained
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Thank you! I hope I said all I needed to!
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Yeah😉
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Thank you for reading.
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My pleasure💖
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Awesome and cool! 😉
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Beautiful write up Kajal.. Great and deep thought put in..
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Thank you, Chiru😊
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Lovely
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Thank you 🌼
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My pleasure always 🤗
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Ha, ha, ha, yes it seems to hide well, perhaps testing the water to reveal itself; but not to worry it might show up again when least expected! Secrets can do that you know! It could just be shy or has some fear to overcome which is only natural. I wish it luck! 😁
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Wonderful words shared by a talented writer.
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Thank you 🌼
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You are welcome Mermaid.
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I did like the poem.
“whether it’s summer or snow.
Rain will stop stealing your smile,
I’ll teach you to paint rainbow.”
The above lines could stand alone.
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Of course it could, but then I had to eliminate something important.
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Just wonderful! I feel like this one would pair well with music :P
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Thank you.
Never thought about that.
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awesome read- may love never hurt; could heartbreaks be painless too….. awesome!!
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Thank you 🌼
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I concur with the comments of your other readers!
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Thanks Liz!
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❤❤🌻🦋☀️ very nice
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Thank you ❤❤🌼
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You’re welcome 🦋
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Great 👍❤️
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Awesome ❤️
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Thank you ❤
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I liked this.
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Glad you did.
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With its rhythm, this piece sounds so beautiful!! :)
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Thank you🙂
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My pleasure!!
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I loved the flow to this poem! Well penned!
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you.
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I didn’t know you existed until you liked my poem, and I’m now I’m binge reading your work. Your words are like rain from heaven burning up the hell. Ineffable.
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Really sweet of you. Thank you.
I like your work too🌻
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May i get your mail, i would like to share something?
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mermaidspen@gmail.com
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Thank you so much.
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😊😊
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this is so beautiful :>
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